3/30/2026 at 11:36:13 AM
For some irrational reason this article annoyed me. It came across arrogant with an attempt at being high-brow, and included too much fluff. Describing the founders as "foundering figures" was amusing - I don't know if the image of taking on water and sinking was the author's intent, but I think I've just become guilty of the same thing I've accused the article of.by shever73
3/30/2026 at 3:26:03 PM
I found myself hoping to find signals that it was written by AI, so that I didn't have to feel embarrassed for an actual author.That's a first for me.
by jasonkester
3/31/2026 at 6:25:16 AM
It feels like the output you’d get from an LLM if you had asked it to write in a literary style. It’s not well-written, and reads more pretentious than capable.by futuraperdita
3/30/2026 at 4:39:02 PM
I came here to say exactly the same thing. The writing is so bad I thought it must be an AI, but then I realized that AIs tend to write much better copy than this drivel.by deepspace
3/30/2026 at 1:04:59 PM
It's not irrational to be irritated by bad writing.by uptownJimmy
3/30/2026 at 4:50:17 PM
it's also wrong. Computer Space and Galaxy Games predated pong. And several non-coin-op games like Nimrod, Tennis for Two and Spacewar! predate pong by decades. A quick trip to the Wikipedia could have revealed this error.I really want this to be an AI generated article because it means AI has come a long way in emulating human fallibility.
by OhMeadhbh
3/31/2026 at 11:43:22 AM
As some have noticed, US writing about games is very console-centricby p_l
3/30/2026 at 1:19:54 PM
> It came across arrogant with an attempt at being high-brow, and included too much fluff.Seems consistent with the name of the website: "Literary Hub"
by roelschroeven
3/30/2026 at 4:53:40 PM
I think that an actionable critique might be that there’s an overuse of “big word” adverbs and adjectives.by clickety_clack
3/30/2026 at 1:22:31 PM
I would have appreciated some pictures.by gwbas1c
3/30/2026 at 4:11:36 PM
maybe trying to be too clever here but i think he was implying they were in over their heads and just really luckyby myko
3/30/2026 at 12:48:27 PM
"weird pbotons"by timcobb